This early novel directed to fourth grade readers has an authentic setting and a fresh and interesting scenario. Action and conflicts abound: Maggie exhibits typical early adolescent moodiness and reluctance to accept a new situation amid frequent miscommunications with her parents; the parents themselves are occasionally at odds; dramatic moments with a bear, a cougar and storms are well-spaced throughout. The issue that becomes the focus of the plot, Maggie's wish to keep Shine at the end of the summer, is the cause of some friction throughout the story.

      Maggie's development is shown through a gradual change of outlook as she learns the skills of sheepherding, gains confidence in dog handling and comes to appreciate the wild setting. However, her decision to disobey her parents and venture off on a dangerous, solo mountain climbing trek on the last day may leave the reader wondering if she has indeed become more responsible.

      There are some inconsistencies in the parents' characters as well. One example follows Maggie's return from that hike. Her mother begins to reprimand her: "I was so worried. You were gone so long! What on earth did you think you were doing? Where did you go? You know you're not supposed to wander off." But she is easily distracted by Maggie's excuse about losing track of time and by another plea to keep Shine. Mom's tone changes abruptly: "You've grown up and you've learned so much. Your dad and I are really proud of you."

      Despite some unevenness in characters, there is enough here--well-presented elements of suspenseful adventure, animals and the unique setting--to attract independent readers to this story.

Recommended.